Hello teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby good afternoon!
Thank you so much for doing a very good job.
You always do good baby and I am so proud of you!
Keep up the good work...
Take care always and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher~
>>correct
Today we talked about drinking alcohol
>>correct
I didn\'t know that Korea is worst country in the world!
>>correct
OR: I wasn\'t aware that Korea is the country which has the worst drinking problem.
I was really shock
>>I was really shocked.
Actully korean drunk a lot
>>Actually Korean people drink a lot.
Even when we having ancestral rites we drunk
>>Even when we have our ancestral rites we also drink.
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