Hello teacher~!

2017-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~ Today we talked about drinking alcohol I didn't know that Korea is worst country in the world! I was really shock Actully korean drunk alot Even when we having ancestral rites we drunk And you also asked me about university drink tradition I think it's a bad traditon We can play a game together or have athletics competition with out drink Anyway i will tell you about korea's these days problem AI (avian influenza) about 1~2 month before AI came in to korea Most of chicken and duck dead Because of this virus the eggs prices rising So, it's really hard to eat eggs these days What do you think about this egg problem Also,i love chicken But i can't eat chicken because of AI:( Now i have to go~ bye~ PS.teacher how about talking about k-pop or bully? (it's just my idea~)

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good afternoon!

Thank you so much for doing a very good job.

You always do good baby and I am so proud of you!
Keep up the good work...

Take care always and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Good afternoon, teacher~

>>correct
 Today we talked about drinking alcohol

>>correct
 I didn\'t know that Korea is worst country in the world!

>>correct

OR: I wasn\'t aware that Korea is the country which has the worst drinking problem.
 I was really shock

>>I was really shocked.
 Actully korean drunk a lot

>>Actually Korean people drink a lot.
 Even when we having ancestral rites we drunk

>>Even when we have our ancestral rites we also drink.

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