hello teacher

2017-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher Camille Today is Monday I hate Monday , I want to have my weekend back Anyway we talked about decision. You asked me about when should parents let teens make their own decision? I think my age is best age for decision (I can deside my self) You also asked me about ‘ would you consider your parents’ dreams for you or your dream why? I think I would consider both My parents will be mad when I don’t follow there dream But It’s my job so I have to fight with them Any way I want to ask you something If you can choose your job do you want to be a teacher again? Or do you want to have another jobs?? (please answer) Now I have to go bye~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! Thank you so much for doing your homework...

Being a teacher is a very good job because I can get to meet many students and I met you because of this but if given another chance I would definitely want to work as an animal doctor. I am planning to study Veterinarian medicine this year, but I am also considering my age...ahaha!

Anyway thanks for the question baby.

Take care and have a good nigt!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher Camille

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Today is Monday I hate Monday , I want to have my weekend back

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Anyway we talked about decision.

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You asked me about when should parents let teens make their own decision?

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I think my age is best age for decision (I can deside my self)

>>I think my age is the best age to make any decisions in life.
You also asked me about ‘ would you consider your parents’ dreams for you or your dream why?

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I think I would consider both

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My parents will be mad when I don’t follow there dream

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But It’s my job so I have to fight with them

>>But it\'s my job so I have to fight for them.
Any way I want to ask you something

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If you can choose your job do you want to be a teacher again?

>>correct
Or do you want to have another jobs??

>>correct
(please answer)

>>correct
Now I have to go bye~!

>>correct

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