Hello teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby! Good evening!
You have no idea how much I love love love talking with you everyday!
Hmm...you are such a sweet and smart girl. ;) And I love you for that. <3 <3 <3
Thank you always for the fun class baby...
Take care always and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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I really like to see you everyday!
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I am really sad that you catch a cold:( I hope you feel better soon
>>I am really sad that you caught a cold.
Anyway we talked about curfew today.
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I think curfew is necessary
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there is alot of danger late at night
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So when we having a curfew we can safe from crime
>>So when we have curfew we can be safe from crime.
We also talked about advantages and disadvantage.
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for advantages We can be safe from crime
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also parents can be peace and don\'t worry about their kid.
>>Parents can also have peace of mind and won\'t worry about their kids.
for disadvantage teens have to play with their friends
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But if we have curfew we can\'t play enough with friends
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I think sometime parents have to let their kids play
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but also kids(teens) have to respect and follow there parents order
>>But also kids (teens) have to respect and follow their parents order.
I don\'t know what is best answer for your topic
>>I don\'t know what is the best answer for your question.
Teacher when you was young did you had a curfew?
>>When you were young teacher did you have a curfew?
and what time do you had to go home?
>>And what time did you have to go home?
do you think curfew is great idea for teens?
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I LOVE YOUR TOPIC EVERYDAY:)
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i have to go now see you tomorrow~!
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