Hello teacher~!

2017-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! I really like to see you everyday! I am really sad that you catch a cold:( I hope you feel better soon Anyway we talked about curfew today. I think curfew is necessary there is alot of danger late at night So when we having a curfew we can safe from crime We also talked about advantages and disadvantage. for advantages We can be safe from crime also parents can be peace and don't worry about their kid. for disadvantage teens have to play with their friends But if we have curfew we can't play enough with friends I think sometime parents have to let their kids play but also kids(teens) have to respect and follow there parents order I don't know what is best answer for your topic Teacher when you was young did you had a curfew? and what time do you had to go home? do you think curfew is great idea for teens? I LOVE YOUR TOPIC EVERYDAY:) i have to go now see you tomorrow~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! Good evening!
You have no idea how much I love love love talking with you everyday!

Hmm...you are such a sweet and smart girl. ;) And I love you for that. <3 <3 <3

Thank you always for the fun class baby...

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

>>correct
 I really like to see you everyday!

>>correct
 I am really sad that you catch a cold:( I hope you feel better soon

>>I am really sad that you caught a cold.
 Anyway we talked about curfew today.

>>correct
 I think curfew is necessary

>>correct
 there is alot of danger late at night

>>correct
 So when we having a curfew we can safe from crime

>>So when we have curfew we can be safe from crime.
 We also talked about advantages and disadvantage.

>>correct
 for advantages We can be safe from crime

>>correct
 also parents can be peace and don\'t worry about their kid.

>>Parents can also have peace of mind and won\'t worry about their kids.
 for disadvantage teens have to play with their friends

>>correct
 But if we have curfew we can\'t play enough with friends

>>correct
 I think sometime parents have to let their kids play

>>correct
 but also kids(teens) have to respect and follow there parents order

>>But also kids (teens) have to respect and follow their parents order.
 I don\'t know what is best answer for your topic

>>I don\'t know what is the best answer for your question.
 Teacher when you was young did you had a curfew?

>>When you were young teacher did you have a curfew?
 and what time do you had to go home?

>>And what time did you have to go home?
 do you think curfew is great idea for teens?

>>correct
 I LOVE YOUR TOPIC EVERYDAY:)

>>correct
 i have to go now see you tomorrow~!

>>correct

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