Hello teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello gorgeous!
Good evening! Thank you so much for appreciating my beauty my dear,kkk. But you know what? You are also beautiful inside and out. I appreciate your beauty because it\'s one of a kind. You are pretty even without make up. That\'s the kind of beauty I like!
By the way you did great baby...
Keep up the good work...
I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow.
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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I really liked your topic today~
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Actully these day i am keep thinking of beautiful person
>>Actually, these days, I keep on thinking of a beautiful person.
Also i am jealous of beautiful person:)
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I am jealous of you too~ teacher,cam you are so beautiful!
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Anyway you asked me \"does beauty affect one\'s success in life?
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Yes, I think beauty affects to anything ike job, self-esteem, comfident, marriage etc.
>>Yes, I think beauty affects anything such as job, self-esteem, confidence, marriage, etc.
Do you want to hear about story happened in korea?
>>Do you want to hear a story that happened in Korea?
I heard that one beautiful person and one soso person wants to go to a same company
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They took a test and they got a same score
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Who do you think choosen from company?
>>Who do you think was chosen by the company?
The answer is beautiful person.
>>The answer is the beautiful person.
I think this is not fair
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That\'s why i am considering of plastic sergery too!!!
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When i become a boss and i am in that situation
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I won\'t chose beautiful person
>>I won\'t choose the beautiful person.
Maybe i will give them a one more test
>>I will probably give them one more test.
Now i have to go~ see you tomorrow~!
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