Hello teacher

2017-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! I really liked your topic today~ Actully these day i am keep thinking of beautiful person Also i am jealous of beautiful person:) I am jealous of you too~ teacher,cam you are so beautiful! Anyway you asked me "does beauty affect one's success in life? Yes, I think beauty affects to anything like job, self-esteem, comfident, marriage etc. Do you want to hear about story happened in korea? I heard that one beautiful person and one soso person wants to go to a same company They took a test and they got a same score Who do you think choosen from company? The answer is beautiful person. I think this is not fair That's why i am considering of plastic sergery too!!! When i become a boss and i am in that situation I won't chose beautiful person Maybe i will give them a one more test Now i have to go~ see you tomorrow~!

강사 첨삭

Hello gorgeous!

Good evening! Thank you so much for appreciating my beauty my dear,kkk. But you know what? You are also beautiful inside and out. I appreciate your beauty because it\'s one of a kind. You are pretty even without make up. That\'s the kind of beauty I like!

By the way you did great baby...

Keep up the good work...

I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow.

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

>>correct
 I really liked your topic today~

>>correct
 Actully these day i am keep thinking of beautiful person

>>Actually, these days, I keep on thinking of a beautiful person.
 Also i am jealous of beautiful person:)

>>correct
 I am jealous of you too~ teacher,cam you are so beautiful!

>>correct
 Anyway you asked me \"does beauty affect one\'s success in life?

>>correct
 Yes, I think beauty affects to anything ike job, self-esteem, comfident, marriage etc.

>>Yes, I think beauty affects anything such as job, self-esteem, confidence, marriage, etc.

Do you want to hear about story happened in korea?

>>Do you want to hear a story that happened in Korea?
 I heard that one beautiful person and one soso person wants to go to a same company

>>correct
 They took a test and they got a same score

>>correct
 Who do you think choosen from company?

>>Who do you think was chosen by the company?
 The answer is beautiful person.

>>The answer is the beautiful person.
 I think this is not fair

>>correct
 That\'s why i am considering of plastic sergery too!!!

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word SURGERY)
 When i become a boss and i am in that situation

>>correct
 I won\'t chose beautiful person

>>I won\'t choose the beautiful person.
 Maybe i will give them a one more test

>>I will probably give them one more test.
 Now i have to go~ see you tomorrow~!

>>correct

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