Hello teacher~!

2017-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! I love your topic today! I really interested in fashio. My parents think i have too many clothes, But i don't think so Actully i have many cloth but when i go out i want a new cloth! That's why i had a argument with my dad yesterday Anyway I didn't exactly told you about latest trend I told you about long pading It is very popular in korea. when i go out half of people wear long pading also coat is very popular in korea too. I think fashion change every season I want to show you the picture of trend clothes What is the latest trend in your country?? Can you tell me about it? I asked you about What do you think about the teenager is wearing makeup? You told that light make up can be fine alot of teenager is wearing makeup like eyeline, eyeshadow etc... I also make up too. but i think we have qualified do the make up But adult think it's bad for teenager. Anyway i have to go~! see you tomorrow~! teacher cam.!~:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!
Good evening!
Thank you so much for the active class we had in the afternoon.

I really had fun talking with you!
I always love love love talking with you!
Keep up the good work.

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!

>>correct
 I love your topic today!

>>correct
 I really interested in fashio.

>>I am really interested in fashion.
 My parents think i have too many clothes, But i don\'t think so

>>correct
 Actully i have many cloth but when i go out i want a new cloth!

>>I actually have many clothes but when I go out I want to buy new ones again!
 That\'s why i had a argument with my dad yesterday

>>That is why I had an argument with my dad yesterday.
 Anyway I didn\'t exactly told you about latest trend

>>Anyway, I didn\'t exactly tell you about the latest trend today in Korea.
 I told you about long pading 

>>Awhile ago, I told you about long padding.
 It is very popular in korea. when i go out half of people wear long padding

>>correct
 also coat is very popular in korea too.

>>Wearing coats is also popular in Korea.
 I think fashion change every season

>>I think fashion changes every season.
 I want to show you the picture of trend clothes

>>I want to show you the picture of trendy clothes nowadays in Korea.
 What is the latest trend in your country??

>>correct
 Can you tell me about it?

>>correct
 I asked you about What do you think about the teenager is wearing makeup?

>>I also asked you about your opinion regarding teenagers wearing some make up.
 You told that light make up can be fine alot of teenager is wearing makeup like eyeline, eyeshadow etc...

>>You told me that light make up can be okay for teenagers such as eye liner, eye shadow etc.
 I also make up too. but i think we have qualified do the make up

>>I also wear some makeup and I think I am qualified too.
 But adult think it\'s bad for teenager.

>>correct
 Anyway i have to go~! see you tomorrow~! teacher cam.!~:)

>>correct

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