Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]! Happy Friday!
It was really nice talking with you today. Our class was really fun!
Thank you so much...
Take care always and have a great weekend!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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Today class helped me to think about my life.
>>Today\'s class helped me think about my life.
I will tell you more about my new years resolution~!
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1. I will wake up early in the morning maybe 7am:)
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2. I will exercise harder
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I will go to the park and take a walk, go to teackwondo everyday
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3. I will study harder.
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I will study math harder. actully math is really hard
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so i have to prepare for it~!
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4. I will make a good friends
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Now i am 16 so, i will meet new class mate.
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so i will make a good friends
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these are my NEW YEAR\'S plan
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Anyway we talked about change.
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Actully when i was young i was quiet
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But now i changed i am kind of noisy kkk
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OR: But now I became noisy.
Now i have to go~! see you on monday
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And have a great weekend
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