Hello teacher~!

2017-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! Today class helped me to think about my life. I will tell you more about my new years resolution~! 1. I will wake up early in the morning maybe 7am:) 2. I will exercise harder I will go to the park and take a walk, go to teackwondo everyday 3. I will study harder. I will study math harder. actully math is really hard so i have to prepare for it~! 4. I will make a good friends Now i am 16 so, i will meet new class mate. so i will make a good friends these are my NEW YEAR'S plan Anyway we talked about change. Actully when i was young i was quiet But now i changed i am kind of noisy kkk Now i have to go~! see you on monday And have a great weekend

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]! Happy Friday!

It was really nice talking with you today. Our class was really fun!

Thank you so much...

Take care always and have a great weekend!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

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 Today class helped me to think about my life.

>>Today\'s class helped me think about my life.
 I will tell you more about my new years resolution~!

>>correct
 1. I will wake up early in the morning maybe 7am:)

>>correct
 2. I will exercise harder

>>correct
 I will go to the park and take a walk, go to teackwondo everyday

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word TAEKWONDO)
 3. I will study harder.

>>correct
 I will study math harder. actully math is really hard 

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the MATH)
 so i have to prepare for it~!

>>correct
 4. I will make a good friends

>>correct
 Now i am 16 so, i will meet new class mate.

>>correct
 so i will make a good friends

>>correct
 these are my NEW YEAR\'S plan

>>correct
 Anyway we talked about change.

>>correct
 Actully when i was young i was quiet

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word ACTUALLY)
 But now i changed i am kind of noisy kkk

>>correct

OR: But now I became noisy.
 Now i have to go~! see you on monday

>>correct
 And have a great weekend

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