Hello teacher:)
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Hi there my dear [이름], happy Monday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I really had fun talking with you today...
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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Today i went to teenager dream center with my school teacher and school friends
>>I went to the teenager dream center with my school teacher and school friends.
You will curious about what is teenager dream center
>>You will be curious about what teenager dream center.
At teenager dream center we can exprience court and other
>>At teenager dream center we can experience trial court and others.
We exprienced court also we had a music class
>>We experienced the trial court and had a music class.
It was really fun.
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there was lawyer, jurge and also examination
>>There was a lawyer, judge and trial court.
It was kind of nervous and tomorrow i will go to the court with my school teacher and friends for experience
>>It was kind of nerve racking and tomorrow, I will go to the court with my school teachers and friends.
we also had music class it was really fun
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When we hear the music we have to guess the music name
>>When we hear the music we have to guess the title of the song.
We played game too.
>>We played a game too.
I love today~!
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OR: I love this day.
Now it\'s almost time for our class!!
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See you in the class
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