Hello teacher:)

2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! Today i went to teenager dream center with my school teacher and school friends You will curious about what is teenager dream center At teenager dream center we can exprience court and other We exprienced court also we had a music class It was really fun. there was lawyer, jurge and also examination It was kind of nervous and tomorrow i will go to the court with my school teacher and friends for exprience we also had music class it was really fun When we hear the music we have to guess the music name We played game too. I love today~! Now it's almost time for our class!! See you in the class

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름], happy Monday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I really had fun talking with you today...

Take care always and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

>>correct
 Today i went to teenager dream center with my school teacher and school friends

>>I went to the teenager dream center with my school teacher and school friends.
 You will curious about what is teenager dream center 

>>You will be curious about what teenager dream center.
 At teenager dream center we can exprience court and other

>>At teenager dream center we can experience trial court and others.
 We exprienced court also we had a music class

>>We experienced the trial court and had a music class.
 It was really fun.

>>correct
 there was lawyer, jurge and also examination

>>There was a lawyer, judge and trial court.
 It was kind of nervous and tomorrow i will go to the court with my school teacher and friends for experience

>>It was kind of nerve racking and tomorrow, I will go to the court with my school teachers and friends.
 we also had music class it was really fun

>>correct
 When we hear the music we have to guess the music name

>>When we hear the music we have to guess the title of the song.
 We played game too.

>>We played a game too.
 I love today~!

>>correct

OR: I love this day.
 Now it\'s almost time for our class!!

>>correct
 See you in the class

>>correct

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