Hello teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby good afternoon!
I feel really sad that we couldn\'t have the class today. But I understand that you have to go to the court.
I can\'t wait to hear more about the court!
Wow! Really? You\'re gonna show me a picture of you wearing hanbok? That will be really great!
Thank you so much!
Looking forward to talking with you again tomorrow.
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good morning, teacher~!
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Today i can\'t participate in our class:(
>>Today I will not be able to participate in the class today.
Because at that time i will be in the court
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I want to tell you about the story.
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i will tell you about the court tomorrow!!
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I am so sorry:(
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Anyway next week is new years day!!!
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I am so exciting
>>I am so excited!
OR: It must be really exciting!
I can get money from my aunt, grandparents
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I really need money.
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I have to buy a clothes, necklace, earring etc....
>>I have to buy clothes, necklace, earring etc.
Also , I will meet my all family we will play together ,eat together
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It will be so much fun
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Do you have any plans for the new years day?
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Do You know we wear hanbok on that day?
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these day most people don\'t wear hanbok
>>These days people no longer wear hanbok.
But i always wear hanbok on that day!!
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My hanbok is very beautiful. maybe i will take picture and send to you~!
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I have to prepare for the court
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BYE teacher~!
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