Hello teacher

2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good morning, teacher~! Today i can't participate in our class:( Because at that time i will be in the court I want to tell you about the story. i will tell you about the court tomorrow!! I am so sorry:( Anyway next week is new years day!!! I am so exciting I can get money from my aunt, grandparents I really need money. I have to buy a clothes, necklace, earring etc.... Also , I will meet my all family we will play together ,eat together It will be so much fun Do you have any plans for the new years day? Do You know we wear hanbok on that day? these day most people don't wear hanbok But i always wear hanbok on that day!! My hanbok is very beautiful. maybe i will take picture and send to you~! I have to prepare for the court BYE teacher~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good afternoon!

I feel really sad that we couldn\'t have the class today. But I understand that you have to go to the court.

I can\'t wait to hear more about the court!

Wow! Really? You\'re gonna show me a picture of you wearing hanbok? That will be really great!
Thank you so much!
Looking forward to talking with you again tomorrow.

Take care and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good morning, teacher~!

>>correct
 Today i can\'t participate in our class:(

>>Today I will not be able to participate in the class today.
 Because at that time i will be in the court

>>correct
 I want to tell you about the story.

>>correct
 i will tell you about the court tomorrow!!

>>correct
 I am so sorry:(

>>correct
 Anyway next week is new years day!!!

>>correct
 I am so exciting

>>I am so excited!
OR: It must be really exciting!

 I can get money from my aunt, grandparents

>>correct
 I really need money.

>>correct
 I have to buy a clothes, necklace, earring etc....

>>I have to buy clothes, necklace, earring etc.
 Also , I will meet my all family we will play together ,eat together

>>correct
 It will be so much fun

>>correct
 Do you have any plans for the new years day?

>>correct
 Do You know we wear hanbok on that day?

>>correct
 these day most people don\'t wear hanbok

>>These days people no longer wear hanbok.
 But i always wear hanbok on that day!!

>>correct
 My hanbok is very beautiful. maybe i will take picture and send to you~!

>>correct
 I have to prepare for the court 

>>correct
 BYE teacher~!

>>correct

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