Hello teacher!

2017-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher~! I missed you so much:) You asked me about the court I was really excited I really saw the suspect!! It was kind of scary...but their was a police so i can be a safe! Anyway we talked about the goals like i said I want to be a police officer like you said most of people think police is for man But i don't think so... nowdays most girls want to be a police officer I really want to be a police If i failed to go to the police university I want to be a teacher I like to teach the student But i don't want to be a kindergarden teacher I like kid but i think it is hard to teach the kid Now i have to go ~! see you tomorrow:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing so many things about your experience in the court.
That was very interesting!
Keep up the good work.

Thane you so much and have good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!

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 I missed you so much:)

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 You asked me about the court

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 I was really excited

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 I really saw the suspect!!

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 It was kind of scary...

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but their was a police so i can be a safe!

>>But there was a police so I am safe.
 Anyway we talked about the goals like i said I want to be a police officer

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 like you said most of people think police is for man

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 But i don\'t think so...

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 nowdays most girls want to be a police officer

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 I really want to be a police

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 If i failed to go to the police university

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 I want to be a teacher 

>>I will consider teaching.

OR: I will consider working as a teacher.
 I like to teach the student

>>I like teaching students.
 But i don\'t want to be a kindergarden teacher

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 I like kid but i think it is hard to teach the kid

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 Now i have to go ~! see you tomorrow:)

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