Hello teacher:)
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Hi there my dear [이름]! Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing a very good in our class.
I always appreciate your time and effort in our class.
Keep up the good work...
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher:)!
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I am really happy today~!
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It\'s snowing now
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It makes me smile~
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If it\'s snow i can ride a sled with my family
>>If it will snow, I can ride a sled with my family.
Anyway what\'s for topic today?
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I am really nervous abot it
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Teacher i fought with my brother
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He really annoy me:(
>>He really annoys me. :(
Do you have any brother and sister?
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I hate my brother
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He always spend alot of money
>>He always spends a lot of money/
He always nag me a lot
>>He always nags me a lot.
He dont\' listen to me or my parents
>>He doesn\'t listen to me nor my parents.
I am really mad about him!!!
>>I am really mad at him!!!
I hate him how can i change him!!
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