Hello teacher:)

2017-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher:)! I am really happy today~! It's snowing now It makes me smile~ If it's snow i can ride a sled with my family Anyway what's for topic today? I am really nervous abot it Teacher i fought with my brother He really annoy me:( Do you have any brother and sister? I hate my brother He always spend alot of money He always nag me alot He dont' listen to me or my parents I am really mad about him!!! I hate him how can i change him!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]! Happy Friday!

Thank you so much for doing a very good in our class.

I always appreciate your time and effort in our class.

Keep up the good work...

Take care and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher:)!

>>correct
 I am really happy today~!

>>correct
 It\'s snowing now

>>correct
 It makes me smile~

>>correct
 If it\'s snow i can ride a sled with my family 

>>If it will snow, I can ride a sled with my family.
 Anyway what\'s for topic today?

>>correct
 I am really nervous abot it

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the words ABOUT)
 Teacher i fought with my brother 

>>correct
 He really annoy me:(

>>He really annoys me. :(
 Do you have any brother and sister?

>>correct
 I hate my brother

>>correct
 He always spend alot of money

>>He always spends a lot of money/
 He always nag me a lot

>>He always nags me a lot.
 He dont\' listen to me or my parents

>>He doesn\'t listen to me nor my parents.
 I am really mad about him!!!

>>I am really mad at him!!!
 I hate him how can i change him!!

>>correct

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