hello teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I just hope that it will snow tomorrow. I know that you are really wanting to get out there and play in the snow! Build a snowman. Roll some balls, big or small. Build a snowman together. Go sledding! Get a sled, make a sled out of cardboard, and just go! Have a snowball fight. Show to other kids how to make a snowball. Just do all these in the snow! Have fun!
~Teacher Chloe
Today i\'ll tell you about my favorite season.
>>Today, I am going to tell you about my favorite season.
My favorite season Is winter because It\'s snow.
>>My favorite season is winter because of the snow.
I can play with the snow like snowball fight,snow slad.
>>I can play snow ball fighting and snow sledding.
It is so fun.
>>Correct!
I wish It always snow.
>>I wish it always snow.
I usally play at my grandparents house because I can play with my cousin.
>>I usually play at my grandparents\' house because I can play with my cousins there.
At winter we play snowball fight together and ride snow slad together.
>>In winter, we play snowball fight and ride snow sled together.
Tomorow i will meet my cousin and we wiil do snow ball fight.
>>Tomorrow, I am going to meet my cousin and we are going to play snowball fight.
I think It will snow tomorrow.
>>I think it will snow tomorrow.
But It dosen\'t snow my cousin and I can\'t do snow ball fight and we can\'t ride a snowslad.
>>But, if it will now snow, we will not be able to play with snow.
It doesn\'t snow I\'ll be so sad because I wate this season for so long time.
>>I\'ll be sad because I waited for this season for a very long time.
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