hello teacher!!
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Hello, [이름]!
Life changes and so will your goals and ambitions.
Just be consistent with them.
Always think positively.
Someday, you\'ll be the person who you would want to become.
~ Teacher Chloe
Today I\'ll tell you about my dream
>>Today, I am going to tell you about my dream.
I want to be a dentist,police,judge.
>>I want to be a dentist, police or a judge.
but I really want to be a dentist because I can help people.
>>But, I really want to be a dentist because I want to help people.
I want to help a many people.
>>I want to help many people.
And I want to be a police officer too because It is awesome and cool.
>>I would also want to be a police officer because it is awesome and cool.
And why I want to be a judge because a judge is awesome too and judge is smart.
>>The reason why I want to be a judge it that because it sounds awesome and smart.
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