hello teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Don\'t be sad about it.
Just welcome the next season.
I am glad that you were able to play in the snow for a while.
Yes, you are right.
Don\'t stay longer outside because you might catch a cold.
Anyway, en[이름] the rest of the winter season.
~Teacher Chloe
Today is the coldest day in the winter.
>>Today is the coldest day in the winter season.
Last night it snow a lot and I was very happy.
>>Last night, it snowed a lot and I was very happy.
So I play with the snow this morning It was fun but It was very cold too.
>>So, I played in the snow this morning. I had fun but it was very cold.
I just play with snow for 3 minute I want to play more but I think I play more I will have a cold.
>>I just played in the snow for three minutes. I wanted to play longer but I might catch a cold.
The snow will melt soon and I\'m sad.
>>The snow is going to melt soon and it makes me sad.
But if the snow is continueing then the snow will not melt.
>>But, if it will continue to snow, it wont.
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