Hello teacher:)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby!
Thank you so much for making your composition.
I have fun reading this... You and your brother look good together I believe kkk...
Anyway thank you so much for sharing something about the new puppy.
Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
I love you!
Take care!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon teacher:)
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lunar new years day is comming!
>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word COMING)
I can eat delicious food
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LIke rice-cake soup,bulgogui, Jeon, fruits i really exciting
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I hope their is snow on that day!
>>I hope it will snow on that day.
I can ride a sled with my relatives
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We can snowfight together~!
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OR: We can play snow fight.
I relly love snow
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OR: I really love snow.
Anyway we talked about change yesterday
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It was hard to talk with you
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I never thouhgt about it before
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OR: I have never thought of that before.
Thank you for teaching me teacher~
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Now my brother singing loudly and also dancing next to me
>>My brother is now singing loudly and also dancing next to me.
He is always anoying me
>>He always annoys me.
You said you have a 10 dog
>>You said you have ten dogs.
Isn\'t it hard to pet them?
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Now i have 1puppy dog in my grandparents house
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He is so cute!!
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But he some time don\'t listen to me
>>But sometimes he doesn\'t listen to me.
But he is cute~!
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Now i have to go now
>>I have to go now.
I have to buy a Dog collar:)
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Bye~ see you in the class
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