Hello teacher:)

2017-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon teacher:) lunar new years day is comming! I can eat delicious food LIke rice-cake soup,bulgogui, Jeon, fruits i really exciting I hope their is snow on that day! I can ride a sled with my relatives We can snowfight together~! I relly love snow Anyway we talked about change yesterday It was hard to talk with you I never thouhgt about it before Thank you for teaching me teacher~ Now my brother singing loudly and also dancing next to me He is always anoying me You said you have a 10 dog Isn't it hard to pet them? Now i have 1puppy dog in my grandparents house He is so cute!! But he some time don't listen to me But he is cute~! Now i have to go now I have to buy a Dog collar:) Bye~ see you in the class

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!
Thank you so much for making your composition.

I have fun reading this... You and your brother look good together I believe kkk...

Anyway thank you so much for sharing something about the new puppy.

Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

I love you!
Take care!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon teacher:)

>>correct
 lunar new years day is comming!

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word COMING)
 I can eat delicious food

>>correct

 LIke rice-cake soup,bulgogui, Jeon, fruits i really exciting

>>correct
 I hope their is snow on that day!

>>I hope it will snow on that day.
 I can ride a sled with my relatives

>>correct
 We can snowfight together~!

>>correct

OR: We can play snow fight.

 I relly love snow

>>correct

OR: I really love snow.
 Anyway we talked about change yesterday

>>correct

 It was hard to talk with you 

>>correct
 I never thouhgt about it before

>>correct

OR: I have never thought of that before.
 Thank you for teaching me teacher~

>>correct
 Now my brother singing loudly and also dancing next to me 

>>My brother is now singing loudly and also dancing next to me.
 He is always anoying me

>>He always annoys me.

 You said you have a 10 dog 

>>You said you have ten dogs.
 Isn\'t it hard to pet them?

>>correct

 Now i have 1puppy dog in my grandparents house

>>correct
 He is so cute!!

>>correct

 But he some time don\'t listen to me 

>>But sometimes he doesn\'t listen to me.
 But he is cute~!

>>correct

 Now i have to go now 

>>I have to go now.
 I have to buy a Dog collar:)

>>correct

 Bye~ see you in the class

>>correct


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