Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for the very fun and active class we had today.
I always appreciate your time with me baby thank you.
Sure thing I will show you all pictures of my dog kkk...
I can\'t wait!
The most important thing is my family. They always make me happy. And yes, my dog
is already a part of my family... So I love them both big time!!
Take care always and have a good night...
I love you!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher
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After i write this composition i will play bawling with my family
>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word BOWLING)
Bawling is becoming popular in korea now
>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word BOWLING)
Anyway we talked about the happiness.
>>Anyway today we talked about Happiness.
I said there are many things makes me happy~!
>>I said there are many things that make me happy.
But most important thing that makes me happy is my family~!!!
>>But the most important thing that makes me happy is my family.
If i don\'t have a family
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I will really loney and depressed
>>I will be really lonely and depressed.
Teacher what is the most important thing that makes you happy?
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Family or your dog
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I want to see your dog!!!
>>correct
Also you asked me about childhood
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When i was young, i was happy everyday
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My parents always played with me
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We go to the zoo, amusement park,beach, swimming pool etc...
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Oh my!! I want to go back
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I want to be younger!!
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I have to go now
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Thank you for teaching me
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Have a nice day~!
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PS. promise me to show your dog okay???
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