Hello teacher~!

2017-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~!:) Today i woke up early because i am practicing to wake up early... Now vacation is almost over:( I didn't do my homework what should i do??? Anyway yesterday we talked about the future I said i don't want to marry. Their is a lot of people who are not married. How about your country? I think i didn't decid at My parents think i should marry So i think i will marry with someone someday:) If It's possible i want to marry with doctor or police officer I don't know why.. I think marrige can be good or bad I hope i can meet someone who are very nice I have to go now~! BYE~!:) love you teacher

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!
Thank you so much for always keeping track of your homework...

You did very good! Impressive job baby!
Keep up the good work...

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

I love you my baby...

Have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!:)

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 Today i woke up early because i am practicing to wake up early...

>>correct

 Now vacation is almost over:(

>>correct
 I didn\'t do my homework what should i do???

>>correct

Anyway yesterday we talked about the future

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 I said i don\'t want to marry.

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 Their is a lot of people who are not married.

>>There is a lot of people who are not married.

OR: Many people are not married.
 How about your country? 

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 I think i didn\'t decid at

>>I think I haven\'t decided yet about it.
 My parents think i should marry

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 So i think i will marry with someone someday:)

>>correct

 If It\'s possible i want to marry with doctor or police officer

>>correct

 I don\'t know why..

>>correct

 I think marrige can be good or bad

>>I think marriage can be good or bad.
 I hope i can meet someone who are very nice

>>I hope someday I can meet someone very nice.

I have to go now~! BYE~!:) love you teacher

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