Hello teacher~!
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Hi there my dear [이름] baby!
Thank you so much for doing your homework...
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
Take care and have a good night...
I love you baby...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher~!
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Today is last day of vacation:(
>>Today is the last day of vacation.
I have to go back to school tomorrow
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Actully i didn\'t do my homework yesterday
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I was little busy...
>>I was a little busy.
So i have to do my homework today:(
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Anyway we talked about social problem
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I said i want to solve the smoking problem
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and i also told you that my uncle is only smoking person in my family
>>And I also told you that my uncle is the only one smoking in the family.
I am really curious that why people smoke
>>I am really curious about why people smoke.
It smell bad also it\'s not good for the health
>>It smells bad and it\'s not good for the health.
I want to marry with man who doesn\'t smoke kkk..
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In korea most of people smoke
>>In Korea most people smoke.
Even my friends smoke too..
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It is not nice
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I have to go now~!:) See you in the class
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