Hello teacher~!

2017-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! Today is last day of vacation:( I have to go back to school tomorrow Actully i didn't do my homework yesterday I was little busy... So i have to do my homework today:( Anyway we talked about social problem I said i want to solve the smoking problem and i also told you that my uncle is only smoking person in my family I am really curious that why people smoke It smell bad also it's not good for the health I want to marry with man who doesn't smoke kkk.. In korea most of people smoke Even my friends smoke too.. It is not nice I have to go now~!:) See you in the class

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름] baby!

Thank you so much for doing your homework...

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

Take care and have a good night...

I love you baby...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!

>>correct
 Today is last day of vacation:(

>>Today is the last day of vacation.
 I have to go back to school tomorrow

>>correct
 Actully i didn\'t do my homework yesterday

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word ACTUALLY)
 I was little busy...

>>I was a little busy.
 So i have to do my homework today:(

>>correct
 Anyway we talked about social problem

>>correct
 I said i want to solve the smoking problem

>>correct
 and i also told you that my uncle is only smoking person in my family

>>And I also told you that my uncle is the only one smoking in the family.
 I am really curious that why people smoke

>>I am really curious about why people smoke.
 It smell bad also it\'s not good for the health

>>It smells bad and it\'s not good for the health.
 I want to marry with man who doesn\'t smoke kkk..

>>correct
 In korea most of people smoke

>>In Korea most people smoke.
 Even my friends smoke too..

>>correct
 It is not nice 

>>correct
 I have to go now~!:) See you in the class

>>correct


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