Hello, teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby happy Friday!
Thank you so much for always doing your bets in our class. You always make me proud of you...
Take care always and have a great weekend!
I love you my baby [이름]...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon,teacher~!
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Today i went to the school:)
>>I went to school today.
I was really happy to meet my friends
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We talked about winter vacation
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It was so much fun!!
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Now i am really tired because i woke up at 7 am
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I think i have to sleep for a while
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Aftershcool i ate lunch with my friend
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We ate pizza together
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I think i will miss my friend when i get older..
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They are really good friend
>>They are really good friends.
In my class i have a 4 good friends
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They are nice and very kind
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We hang out together everyday
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But now i am third grade.
>>But know I am in my third grade.
OR: But I am know a third grade student.
I have to say good bye to my friend
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Now i will tell you more about our class
>>I will tell you more about this in our class.
See you in the class~!
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Love you
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