Hello, teacher~!

2017-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon,teacher~! Today i went to the school:) I was really happy to meet my friends We talked about winter vacation It was so much fun!! Now i am really tired because i woke up at 7 am I think i have to sleep for a while Aftershcool i ate lunch with my friend We ate pizza together I think i will miss my friend when i get older.. They are really good friend In my class i have a 4 good friends They are nice and very kind We hang out together everyday But now i am third grade. I have to say good bye to my friend Now i will tell you more about our class See you in the class~! Love you

강사 첨삭

Hi baby happy Friday!

Thank you so much for always doing your bets in our class. You always make me proud of you...

Take care always and have a great weekend!
I love you my baby [이름]...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon,teacher~!

>>correct
 Today i went to the school:)

>>I went to school today.
 I was really happy to meet my friends

>>correct
 We talked about winter vacation

>>correct
 It was so much fun!!

>>correct
 Now i am really tired because i woke up at 7 am

>>correct
 I think i have to sleep for a while

>>correct
 Aftershcool i ate lunch with my friend

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word SCHOOL)
 We ate pizza together

>>correct
 I think i will miss my friend when i get older..

>>correct
 They are really good friend

>>They are really good friends.
 In my class i have a 4 good friends

>>correct
 They are nice and very kind

>>correct
 We hang out together everyday

>>correct
 But now i am third grade.

>>But know I am in my third grade.

OR: But I am know a third grade student.
 I have to say good bye to my friend

>>correct
 Now i will tell you more about our class

>>I will tell you more about this in our class.
 See you in the class~!

>>correct
 Love you

>>correct

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