Hello, teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby! I missed you so so soooooooooo much!
I am so glad you are back!
Welcome back baby!
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
I love love love you!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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Long time no see~! ,I missed you so much
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I was really busy:(
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I did my homework, aslo i have to get ready for my school
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I am really tired;;
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Any way i will tell you about my weekend story
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I went to the capital of korea . i think you will know seoul
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And i was really busy on that day too
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I only slept for 3hours i havet to wake up at 4
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When we go to seoul we took a bus.
>>We took the bus to Seoul.
I ate delicious food their
>>I ate many delicious food there.
and next we went to amusement park \"lotte world\"
>>And next we went to the amusement park named Lotte world.
I never been to lotte world before
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but i went to the everland
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At their i rode scary things
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I love scary things it makes me happy
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But unfortunately my brother doesn\'t like to ride a scary things
>>But unfortunately my brother doesn\'t like scary rides.
So i have to ride alone
>>So I had to take the rides by myself.
At night i watched a Parade
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It was colorful and beautiful
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I think i like lotte world because lotte world is in the buliding
>>I think I prefer the Lotte World because it is an indoor amusement park.
so we can enjoy it every season
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And when we come back to our country
>>And when we went back to our place...
we rode a KTX it was really fast
>>We rode the KTX and it was really fast.
now i have to eat some snack
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see you on the class~!
>>See you in class...
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