Hello teacher

2017-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! today is our seond class i am so exciting I was really tired today I have to help my brother because he is going out on school president Did you met my brother today? I think he is boring person what about you? Anyway, today i woke up very early Now i feel exausted:( I want to go to sleep But i have to meet you:) so i am not gonna sleep if i sleep during your class tell me to wake up I think i am going to sleep:( I think i have to change my time Our class is so late I think i will not very attention to our class NOW i have to go :) So see you on the class teacher~!:)

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening!

Happy midweek!

Thank you for the wonderful class.

I am so sorry for being emotional awhile ago baby..

I just love my dogs so much...

I am so proud of you too baby thank you for sharing me those..,

Take care and have a good night baby...

ilove you!

xoxoTeacher cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

>>correct
 today is our seond class i am so exciting

>>Today is the second day of our class and I am so excited!
 I was really tired today 

>>correct
 I have to help my brother because he is going out on school president

>>correct
 Did you met my brother today?

>>Did you meet my brother today?
 I think he is boring person what about you?

>>I think he is a boring person.
 Anyway, today i woke up very early 

>>correct
 Now i feel exausted:(

>>Now I feel exhausted.
 I want to go to sleep

>>correct
 But i have to meet you:) so i am not gonna sleep

>>correct
 if i sleep during your class tell me to wake up

>>correct
 I think i am going to sleep:(

>>correct
 I think i have to change my time

>>correct
 Our class is so late 

>>correct
 I think i will not very attention to our class

>>correct
 NOW i have to go :)

>>correct
 So see you on the class teacher~!:)

>>correct

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