Hello teacher~!

2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~! I feeling kind of great today:) I think i had a good sleep yesterday!! about next month there will be school p.e day I am so exciting But we had a little fight.. I will tell you about it We wear diffrent clothes in each class So we have to choose pretty cloth But my class and other class choose same things So we started to fight And finally we lose It was really pretty cloth i want it i want it so much :( So my class and other class didn't get along Now i am finding new clothes I am little busy now:) Anyway we talked about pet yesterday I am really sorry about that I think every one has to love animal and do not violence them Now i have to find more pretty cloth See you on the class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! Good evening! Thank you once again for the wonderful class tonight.

You were soooooo amazing!
You were able to share your opinions about the said topic thank you so much.

And I am so sorry to hear something about the fight.

I hope you could find better clothing for your PE day!

Take care baby an have a good night!

I love love love you!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher~!

>>correct

I feeling kind of great today:)

>>correct

I think i had a good sleep yesterday!!

>>correct

about next month there will be school p.e day

>>correct

I am so exciting 

>>I am so excited about it!

But we had a little fight..

>>correct

I will tell you about it

>>correct

We wear diffrent clothes in each class

>>correct

So we have to choose pretty cloth

>>So we have to choose pretty clothes.

But my class and other class choose same things

>>But unfortunately my class and the other class chose the same clothing.

So we started to fight

>>correct

And finally we lose

>>But we lost.

It was really pretty cloth i want it i want it so much :(

>>It was very pretty and I want it so bad.

So my class and other class didn\'t get along

>>correct

Now i am finding new clothes

>>correct

I am little busy now:)

>>correct

Anyway we talked about pet yesterday

>>correct

I am really sorry about that 

>>correct

I think every one has to love animal and do not violence them

>>I think everyone has to love animals and not abuse them.

Now i have to find more pretty cloth

>>Now I have to find prettier clothing.

See you on the class~!

>>See you in class.

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