hello teacher~
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Hi there my dear [이름]!
Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
You were able to share your opinions about this and I am so proud of you!
Keep up the good work!
Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
Take care and have a great weekend!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
hello teacher today I will tell you about my hobby.
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My hobby is sports.
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I love sports (execept swiming).
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I like sports because I am good at it and it is fun.
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my friends always said I am good at sports and I am so happy to hear that.
>>My friends always tell me I am good at sports and I am happy to hear that.
I like soccer and baseball. I am very good at them.
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bowling It\'s my favorite sports. I am not good at it but It\'s really fun.
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But I will practice and do my best.
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When I will be good at bowling and bowling will be more fun then be for.
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And I will be very happy.
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Every Wednesday my family and I go to play bowling but now
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We don\'t practice, and i\'m sad.
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