hello teacher~

2017-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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hello teacher today I will tell you about my hobby. My hobby is sports. I love sports (execept swiming). I like sports because I am good at it and it is fun. my friends always said I am good at sports and I am so happy to hear that. I like soccer and baseball. I am very good at them. bowling It's my favorite sports. I am not good at it but It's really fun. But I will practice and do my best. When I will be good at bowling and bowling will be more fun then be for. And I wll be very happy. Every Wednesday my family and I go to play bowling but now We don't practice, and i'm sad.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!
Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.

You were able to share your opinions about this and I am so proud of you!
Keep up the good work!
Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

Take care and have a great weekend!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

hello teacher today I will tell you about my hobby. 

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My hobby is sports. 

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I love sports (execept swiming). 

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I like sports because I am good at it and it is fun. 

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my friends always said I am good at sports and I am so happy to hear that. 

>>My friends always tell me I am good at sports and I am happy to hear that.

I like soccer and baseball. I am very good at them. 

>>correct

bowling It\'s my favorite sports. I am not good at it but It\'s really fun.

>>correct

But I will practice and do my best. 

>>correct           
When I will be good at bowling and bowling will be more fun then be for.

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word BEFORE)

And I will be very happy.

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Every Wednesday my family and I go to play bowling but now 

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We don\'t practice, and i\'m sad.

>>correct

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