hello teacher
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Happy Monday my dear [이름]!
That was one great weekend you had!
It\'s always nice to be a kid. I miss being a kid whew.. T.T
I hope you could spend more time with your cousin...
Take care always!
Have a good night!
I love you!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher.
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Today I will tell you about what I do at the weekend.
>>Today I will tell you what I did last weekend.
At saturday I watched movie with my family.
>>Last Saturday I watched a movie with my family.
The movie was very fun I want to watch that movie again.
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And at sunday I went to my grand parent house and I play with my cousin.
>>And last Sunday I went to my grandparent\'s house and played with my cousin.
We watched tv together we played game together and we even played with a fire It was very fun. and we road a bike.
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I think riding a bike is very fun. I want to ride it again.
>>correct
I wish I play with my cousin everyday.
>>I WISH I COULD play with my cousin everyday.
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