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2017-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about what I do at the weekend. At saturday I watched movie with my family. The movie was very fun I want to watch that movie again. And at sunday I went to my grand parent house and I play with my cousin. We watched tv together we played game together and we even played with a fire It was very fun. and we road a bike. I think riding a bike is very fun. I want to ride it again. I wish I play with my cousin everyday.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday my dear [이름]!

That was one great weekend you had!
It\'s always nice to be a kid. I miss being a kid whew.. T.T

I hope you could spend more time with your cousin...

Take care always!
Have a good night!
I love you!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher. 

>>correct

Today I will tell you about what I do at the weekend. 

>>Today I will tell you what I did last weekend.
At saturday I watched movie with my family. 

>>Last Saturday I watched a movie with my family.

The movie was very fun I want to watch that movie again. 

>>correct                             
And at sunday I went to my grand parent house and I play with my cousin. 

>>And last Sunday I went to my grandparent\'s house and played with my cousin.

We watched tv together we played game together and we even played with a fire It was very fun. and we road a bike. 

>>correct                                            
I think riding a bike is very fun. I want to ride it again.

>>correct

I wish I play with my cousin everyday.

>>I WISH I COULD play with my cousin everyday.

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