hello teacher!!~

2017-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Today I will tell you about spring. Winter is over I wlsh winter was longer. Spring is wonderful season. But I have pollen allergy and my eyes are itchy and I'm very sad. When I scratch my eyes Is very hart. Spring is very wonderful for other people. But I really hate spring. specially the flowers. I wlsh spring was gone. and flowers too. I want to cure this flower allergy. Because I'm sad. I will go to the docter and see what's wrong.

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much baby for a wonderful job in doing your homework...

You did a very good job!

I hope you will keep up the good work Mr.President.

Take care and have a good night my dear...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Today I will tell you about spring. 

>>correct                                              
Winter is over I wlsh winter was longer. 

>>correct                                      
Spring is wonderful season. 

>>Spring is a wonderful season.                                                 
But I have pollen allergyand my eyes are itchy and I\'m very sad. 

>>correct                        
When I scratch my eyes Is very hart. 

>>When I scratch my eyes it usually hurts.                                    
Spring is very wonderful for other people. 

>>correct                                          
But I really hate spring. specially the flowers.

>>correct                                      

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