hello teacher!~
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강사 첨삭
Happy Friday!
Wow that was one very good plan you have for this weekend!
I hope you will have a great weekend.
I can\'t wait to hear more of your stories about this.
Take care baby and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Today I will tell you about this weekend.
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This weekend I will go to my grand parents house and I will play with my cousin.
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I will play hide and seek, smart phone games and watch tv.
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It will be so fun.
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I like playing with my cousin. because It\'s very very fun.
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I want to play with them every day.
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I will tell you about my relative I have one older brother and one yonger brother.
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I like them and they like me too.
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We never fight together.
>>We never fought with each other.
And I like it.
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This weekend I want to watch a movie with my cousin.
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My dad has a many movie and he show us a movie.
>>My dad has many movies and he showed us a movie.
It\'s so fun.
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My cousin and I like to watching movie.
>>My cousin and I like watching movies.
And we want to watch a movie this weekend.
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