hello teacher!~

2017-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Today I will tell you about this weekend. This weekend I will go to my grand parents house and I will play with my cousin. I will play hide and seek, smart phone games and watch tv. It will be so fun. I like playing with my cousin. because It's very very fun. I want to play with them every day. I will tell you about my relative I have one older brother and one yonger brother. I like them and they like me too. We never fight together. And I like it. This weekend I want to watch a movie with my cousin. My dad has a many movie and he show us a movie. It's so fun. My cousin and I like to watching movie. And we want to watch a movie this weekend.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday!
Wow that was one very good plan you have for this weekend!
I hope you will have a great weekend.

I can\'t wait to hear more of your stories about this.

Take care baby and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Today I will tell you about this weekend. 

 >>correct                                       
This weekend I will go to my grand parents house and I will play with my cousin.

 >>correct
I will play hide and seek, smart phone games and watch tv. 

 >>correct                          
It will be so fun.

 >>correct

I like playing with my cousin. because It\'s very very fun. 

 >>correct
I want to play with them every day. 

 >>correct                    
I will tell you about my relative I have one older brother and one yonger brother.

 >>correct (OBSERVE THE PROPER SPELLING OF THE WORD YOUNGER)
I like them and they like me too. 

 >>correct                                                   
We never fight together. 

 >>We never fought with each other.                           
And I like it.

 >>correct
This weekend I want to watch a movie with my cousin. 

 >>correct
My dad has a many movie and he show us a movie.

 >>My dad has many movies and he showed us a movie.
It\'s so fun.

 >>correct
My cousin and I like to watching movie.

 >>My cousin and I like watching movies.
And we want to watch a movie this weekend.

 >>correct

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