Hello teacher~!

2017-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good evening teacher~! Did you had a great weekend? I went to the downtown with my mom We shopping together and we ate together It was so much fun~:) I bought a one t-shirt, one jeans, pink jacket and Cardigan It was kind of expensive to me But it maked me really happy Then i got really really hungry So, we ate noodle It was delicious, i never taste like this noodle before Then we just walk together at that we found a jewerly shop named'motdeon goyangi' You maybe doesn't know that name But it's little popular for students Anyway i bought a ring and neckless It was kind of pretty:) Next we ate 'hotdog' the line was really long many people was waiting for the hotdog It was delicious This is my weekend story:) Did you had a nice weekend?

강사 첨삭

Hi baby thank you so much for doing great in our class!

You and your brother always impress me.. Thank you so much...

Cant wait again to hear your voice tomorrow.

I love you!
Have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good evening teacher~!

>>correct
 Did you had a great weekend?

>>Did you have a great weekend?
 I went to the downtown with my mom

>>correct

OR: I went downtown with my mom.
 We shopping together and we ate together 

>>We went shopping and ate together.
 It was so much fun~:)

>>correct
 I bought a one t-shirt, one jeans, pink jacket and Cardigan

>>I bought one shirt/a short, a pir of jeans and pick jacket and a cardigan.
 It was kind of expensive to me

>>correct
 But it maked me really happy

>>But it made me really happy.
 Then i got really really hungry 

>>correct
 So, we ate noodle

>>correct
 It was delicious, i never taste like this noodle before

>>It was delicious I never tasted like this before.
 Then we just walk together at that we found a jewerly shop named\'motdeon goyangi\'

>>correct
 You maybe doesn\'t know that name

>>You are probably not familiar with this.
 But it\'s little popular for students

>>correct
 Anyway i bought a ring and neckless 

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word NECKLACE
 It was kind of pretty:)

>>correct
 Next we ate \'hotdog\' the line was really long many people was waiting for the hotdog

>>Next we ate hotdog but the line was really long and many people were waiting in line.
 It was delicious

>>correct
 This is my weekend story:)

>>correct
 Did you had a nice weekend?

>>Did you have a nice weekend?

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