Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby thank you so much for doing great in our class!
You and your brother always impress me.. Thank you so much...
Cant wait again to hear your voice tomorrow.
I love you!
Have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good evening teacher~!
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Did you had a great weekend?
>>Did you have a great weekend?
I went to the downtown with my mom
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OR: I went downtown with my mom.
We shopping together and we ate together
>>We went shopping and ate together.
It was so much fun~:)
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I bought a one t-shirt, one jeans, pink jacket and Cardigan
>>I bought one shirt/a short, a pir of jeans and pick jacket and a cardigan.
It was kind of expensive to me
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But it maked me really happy
>>But it made me really happy.
Then i got really really hungry
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So, we ate noodle
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It was delicious, i never taste like this noodle before
>>It was delicious I never tasted like this before.
Then we just walk together at that we found a jewerly shop named\'motdeon goyangi\'
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You maybe doesn\'t know that name
>>You are probably not familiar with this.
But it\'s little popular for students
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Anyway i bought a ring and neckless
>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word NECKLACE
It was kind of pretty:)
>>correct
Next we ate \'hotdog\' the line was really long many people was waiting for the hotdog
>>Next we ate hotdog but the line was really long and many people were waiting in line.
It was delicious
>>correct
This is my weekend story:)
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Did you had a nice weekend?
>>Did you have a nice weekend?
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