Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening my dear [이름]!
Thank you so much for this composition.
I am so glad that you had a wonderful day today. But can i ask you a favor my dear? Can you please sing that song for me tomorrow? kkk...
Kidding...
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Today i will tell you about what I did today.
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I went to school and I played soccer.
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OR: I went to school and played soccer.
It was fun.
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And I studyed Math,Korean,music and P.E.
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I want to play dodge ball at my P.E. class but we were just running at P.E. class.
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And at Music class we sing a song It was very great.
>>And at Music class we sang a song and it was great.
And korean class was so boring.
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I almost sleep but I collect one\'s mind.
>>I almost fell asleep but I still managed to compose myself.
And last of all at Math class we take a tess.
>>Lastly, we took a test in our Math class.
It was very easy and fun too.
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I like going school.
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