Hello teacher~!

2017-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Today i will tell you about what I did today. I went to school and I played soccer. It was fun. And I studyed Math,Korean,music and P.E. I want to play dodge ball at my P.E. class but we were just running at P.E. class. And at Music class we sing a song It was very great. And korean class was so boring. I almost sleep but I collect one's mind. And last of all at Math class we take a tess. It was very easy and fun too. I like going school.

강사 첨삭

Good evening my dear [이름]!

Thank you so much for this composition.

I am so glad that you had a wonderful day today. But can i ask you a favor my dear? Can you please sing that song for me tomorrow? kkk...

Kidding...

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.

Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Today i will tell you about what I did today.

>>correct
 I went to school and I played soccer.

>>correct

OR: I went to school and played soccer.
 It was fun.

>>correct
 And I studyed Math,Korean,music and P.E.

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word STUDIED)
 I want to play dodge ball at my P.E. class but we were just running at P.E. class.

>>correct
 And at Music class we sing a song It was very great.

>>And at Music class we sang a song and it was great.
 And korean class was so boring.

>>correct
 I almost sleep but I collect one\'s mind.

>>I almost fell asleep but I still managed to compose myself.
 And last of all at Math class we take a tess.

>>Lastly, we took a test in our Math class.
 It was very easy and fun too.

>>correct
 I like going school.

 >>correct

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