Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby good evening!
It\'s a TGI Friday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I always appreciate your time and effort in doing such.
I hope you will keep up the good work.
Call you again Monday baby!
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~.
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Today I will tell you about my day
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Today I went to school and I read a book.
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It was very boring.
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And I studyed korean It was very fun.
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And I have a P.E. class It was so fun It was better than a korean.
>>We also had PE class and it was so fun and was better than Korean.
And we have a break time.
>>And we had our break time.
I played weed my friends.
>>I also played with my friends.
We played soccer.
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I\'m not good at soccer because I hate soccer.
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Today was a hard day.
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