Hello teacher~!

2017-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~. Today I will tell you about my day Today I went to school and I read a book. It was very boring. And I studyed korean It was very fun. And I have a P.E. class It was so fun It was better than a korean. And we have a break time. I played weed my friends. We played soccer. I'm not good at soccer because I hate soccer. Today was a hard day.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening!

It\'s a TGI Friday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I always appreciate your time and effort in doing such.

I hope you will keep up the good work.

Call you again Monday baby!
Take care and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher~.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about my day

>>correct
 Today I went to school and I read a book.

>>correct
 It was very boring.

>>correct
 And I studyed korean It was very fun.

>>correct
 And I have a P.E. class It was so fun It was better than a korean.

>>We also had PE class and it was so fun and was better than Korean.
 And we have a break time.

>>And we had our break time.
 I played weed my friends.

>>I also played with my friends.
 We played soccer.

>>correct
 I\'m not good at soccer because I hate soccer.

>>correct
 Today was a hard day.

>>correct

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