hello teacher

2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon teacher. Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend. At saturday I went to a wedding holl. I ate delicious food I wnat to eat it again. And I play computer games with my dad friends son. It was very fun. At sunday I went to mokpo with my family, cousin. We ate many delicious food. I played with my cousin. We run around a rock. And we saw a sea. It was Beautiful.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Happy Monday baby!
That was one great weekend you had!
I hope I can do the same...T.T

Thank you so much for sharing baby...

Call you again have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Good afternoon teacher.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend.

>>correct
 At saturday I went to a wedding holl.

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word HALL)
 I ate delicious food I wnat to eat it again.

>>correct
 And I play computer games with my dad friends son.

>>I also played some computer games with my dad\'s friend\'s son.
 It was very fun.

>>correct
 At sunday I went to mokpo with my family, cousin.

>>correct
 We ate many delicious food.

>>correct
 I played with my cousin.

>>correct
 We run around a rock.

>>We ran around a rock.
 And we saw a sea.

>>correct
 It was Beautiful.

>>correct

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