hello teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hi there! Happy Monday baby!
That was one great weekend you had!
I hope I can do the same...T.T
Thank you so much for sharing baby...
Call you again have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon teacher.
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Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend.
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At saturday I went to a wedding holl.
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I ate delicious food I wnat to eat it again.
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And I play computer games with my dad friends son.
>>I also played some computer games with my dad\'s friend\'s son.
It was very fun.
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At sunday I went to mokpo with my family, cousin.
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We ate many delicious food.
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I played with my cousin.
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We run around a rock.
>>We ran around a rock.
And we saw a sea.
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It was Beautiful.
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