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2017-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today i will tell you about my day. Today i went to school and I read a book and I studyed math and english. And I played with my friends. We played soccer and dodge ball. It was very fun and I want to play tomorrow. I always go everywhere with my friends. But when my friends are busy I just go buy my self. My school it's very fun it has many fun things to play. My friends and I really love to play and we always play.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!
Thank you so much for doing a great job...

I always appreciate your effort in doing such...

I hope you will keep up the good work...

Take care and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher. 

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Today i will tell you about my day. 

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Today i went to school and I read a book and I studyed math and english. 

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And I played with my friends. 

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We played soccer and dodge ball. 

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It was very fun and I want to play tomorrow. 

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 I always go everywhere with my friends.

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 But when my friends are busy I just go buy my self. 

 >>correct    
My school it\'s very fun it has many fun things to play. 

>>It\'s very fun to play at school.         
My friends and I really love to play and we always play.

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