hello teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby!
Thank you so much for doing a great job...
I always appreciate your effort in doing such...
I hope you will keep up the good work...
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher.
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Today i will tell you about my day.
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Today i went to school and I read a book and I studyed math and english.
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And I played with my friends.
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We played soccer and dodge ball.
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It was very fun and I want to play tomorrow.
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I always go everywhere with my friends.
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But when my friends are busy I just go buy my self.
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My school it\'s very fun it has many fun things to play.
>>It\'s very fun to play at school.
My friends and I really love to play and we always play.
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