Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for doing a great job...
This made me really sad...I also cried...T.T
This is so tragic that I even want to spend more time with the people I love specially my family...
Thank you so much and well talk more about this later.
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!
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Today i want to tell you about the Ferry Sewol
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OR: Today I want to tell you about the Sewol Ferry.
Now i am keep crying about this accident
>>I am now crying because of the incident.
Because i saw a message between the parents and their sons and daughters
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I am so sorry to them i want a truth
>>I am so sorry for them and I want the truth.
The message was like this
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time- 9:00 Son: dad i love you so much
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time- 9:07 Dad: oh sun i love you so much too have fun at the jeju island
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time- 9:26( when he(dad) noticed about sewol accident) son please call me back...
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time- 10:03 i love you so much son please tell me that you alive please....
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I was really sad now i can\'t stop crying
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Another message
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Younger Sister: bring souvenir :) i am wating for them
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Older sister: okay:) wait for it!!!
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Older sister: I am sorry.. i think i can bring you a present
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It\'s very sad
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I hope every one have a great time at the Kingdom of God
>>I hope everyone would have a great time at the Kingdom of God.
I think i have to go now teacher....
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See you on the class
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