Hello teacher~!

2017-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about my P.E. class. Today we have a P.E. class and It was fun. We played soccer,baseball and dodge ball. I forgot to tell you teacher. I love P.E. because I am very good at it. And i don't have to study. I hate studying. Because It is so boring.

강사 첨삭

Wow impressive job baby!

Thank you so much for sharing.

I really envy you for being so good at sports because I am not ahahah!

I hope to hear much about this tomorrow my dear.

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher. 

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Today I will tell you about my P.E. class.

>>correct                                            
Today we have a P.E. class and It was fun. 

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We played soccer,baseball and dodge ball. 

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I forgot to tell you teacher. 

 >>correct                                                       
I love P.E. because I am very good at it.

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 And i don\'t have to study.

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 I hate studying.

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 Because It is so boring.

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