Hello teacher~!

2017-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good evening teahcer~! We talked about sewol ferry yesterday.. It was really sad I told you the mean of yellow ribbon The safe return of the loved ones Actully teacher i went to the art museum in the school And i watched a picture about sewol victim It was really sad I want to see you the picture The name of the picture is " wake up student.. we are here" and" mom i really miss you let's meet in the dream love you" I cried i just kept watch the picture with my friends They also cried too... It was really sad when you come to korea i will show you this,,, Let's talk more about it If you ask something tell me on the class

강사 첨삭

Geez...that is really tragic.

It always makes me sad thinking of the victims of the Sewol accident.

I can\'t wait to hear more about this in our class.

Thank you baby have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good evening teahcer~!

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We talked about sewol ferry yesterday..

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It was really sad

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I told you the mean of yellow ribbon The safe return of the loved ones 

>>I told you the meaning of the yellow ribbon which is safe return of their loved ones.

Actully teacher i went to the art museum in the school

>>Actually teacher I went to the art museum in school.

And i watched a picture about sewol victim

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It was really sad

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I want to see you the picture

>>I want to show you the pictures.

The name of the picture is \" wake up student.. we are here\"

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and\" mom i really miss you let\'s meet in the dream love you\"

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I cried i just kept watch the picture with my friends

>>I cried while looking at the pictures.

They also cried too...

>>They cried too.

OR: They also cried.

It was really sad when you come to korea i will show you this,,

>>correct
 Let\'s talk more about it

 >>correct

 If you ask something tell me on the class

>>correct

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