Hello teacher~!
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Geez...that is really tragic.
It always makes me sad thinking of the victims of the Sewol accident.
I can\'t wait to hear more about this in our class.
Thank you baby have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good evening teahcer~!
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We talked about sewol ferry yesterday..
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It was really sad
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I told you the mean of yellow ribbon The safe return of the loved ones
>>I told you the meaning of the yellow ribbon which is safe return of their loved ones.
Actully teacher i went to the art museum in the school
>>Actually teacher I went to the art museum in school.
And i watched a picture about sewol victim
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It was really sad
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I want to see you the picture
>>I want to show you the pictures.
The name of the picture is \" wake up student.. we are here\"
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and\" mom i really miss you let\'s meet in the dream love you\"
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I cried i just kept watch the picture with my friends
>>I cried while looking at the pictures.
They also cried too...
>>They cried too.
OR: They also cried.
It was really sad when you come to korea i will show you this,,
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Let\'s talk more about it
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If you ask something tell me on the class
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