Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear [이름]! Happy Monday!
I was so happy to have our class today.
Thank you so much as always for the effort and for always making the class fun and active, I always appreciate it.
Keep up the good work.
Call you again you take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^
Hello teacher.
>>correct
Today I will tell you about my day.
>>correct
Today I went to school and I play with my friends.
>>I went to school today and played with my friends.
And I studyed math, english and korean.
>>I studied Math, English and Korean.
It was very fun.
>>correct
I play soccer today.
>>I played soccer today.
I am not good at soccer.
>>correct
So I practice very hard.
>>So I practiced very hard.
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