Hello teacher!!!

2017-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about soccer. I played soccer every Thursday and Saturday. It is very fun. But It's too hard to play it. Because I have to run and It has many rules. I am not good at soccer but I will practice hard and I will be good. And I will participate a soccer match. It will be very hard and fun. I hope we win the match.

강사 첨삭

Wow! You will be joining a soccer match! Good luck to that baby!

I am sure you will win this match because I know how much you love it.

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.

Take care baby and have a good night!

I love you!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher. 

 >>correct                                                                       
Today I will tell you about soccer. 

 >>correct                                                 
I played soccer every Thursday and Saturday. 

 >>I play soccer every Thursday and Saturday.                                   
It is very fun. 

 >>correct                                                                     
But It\'s too hard to play it. 

 >>correct                                                       
Because I have to run and It has many rules. 

  >>correct                                       
I am not good at soccer but I will practice hard and I will be good. 

 >>correct                 
And I will participate a soccer match.

 >>And I will participate in soccer match.
 It will be very hard and fun.

 >>correct
 I hope we win the match.

 >>I hope we could win the match.

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