hello teacher~!!
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강사 첨삭
Wow happy Monday!
Spring is in the air!
Flowers are everywhere and that is very good! Sometimes it\'s just annoying to suffer from allergies. We call that allergic rhinitis which is very much similar with a common cold.
I hope you cold en[이름] spring again baby!
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again!
Have a good night baby!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher!!.
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Today I will tell you about spring.
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Our we have a 4season.
>>Our country has 4 seasons.
And spring is here.
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And I\'m very happy.
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When the spring come I can see a flowers.
>>When spring comes I can see flowers.
It\'s very beautiful.
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I touch it every time.
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And It feels tickled.
>>And it ticles me.
The flowers smell It\'s very good.
>>Flowers smell very good.
But I hate spring.
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Because I have a flowers allergy.
>>Because I usually suffer from allergy.
And because of them my eyes are very tickeld.
>>And because of them my eyes are itchy.
I wish I don\'t have a flowers allergy .
>>I wish I don\'t have an allergy.
And I like spring again.
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