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2017-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher today I will tell you about last weekend. At Saturday and Sunday I have a soccer match. At Saturday our team has win and Sunday We lose. I want to win but our team was a good soccer player and at other they are so good at soccer.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby happy Monday!

How have you been doing?

I appreciate your effort in doing your best always keep up the good work!

Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

Have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher today I will tell you about last weekend.

>>correct
 At Saturday and Sunday I have a soccer match.

>>Last Saturday and Sunday I had a soccer match.
 At Saturday our team has win and Sunday

>>Last Saturday our team has won the game but last sunday.
 We lose.

>>We lost the game.
 I want to win but our team was a good soccer player and

>>I wanted to win but our team was good...
 at other they are so good at soccer.

>>But I think they are better than us.

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