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Hello teacher today I will tell you about last weekend.
>>correct
At Saturday and Sunday I have a soccer match.
>>Last Saturday and Sunday I had a soccer match.
At Saturday our team has win and Sunday
>>Last Saturday our team has won the game but last sunday.
We lose.
>>We lost the game.
I want to win but our team was a good soccer player and
>>I wanted to win but our team was good...
at other they are so good at soccer.
>>But I think they are better than us.
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