hello teacher!!!!!
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Happy Wednesday baby!
Thank you so much for sending in your composition.
I really appreciate your time making this.
And don\'t say you\'re not smart because you are. Believe in yourself like I always believe in you.
I will call you then again my dear.
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher.
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Today I will tell you about my dream.
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My dream Is being a dentist or police.
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Why I want to be a dentist are rich.
>>The reason why I want to be a dentist is because of the salary I can earn.
And why I want to be a police is police are cool and good.
>>I want to be a police because it\'s cool.
But I have to be smart But actually I am not smart so I have to study hard and be more smarter.
>>I have to be smart to achieve my goal.
I am sad that I am not smart and when I\'m smart I will be very happy and cry.
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