hello teacher!!!!!

2017-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about my dream. My dream Is being a dentist or police. Why I want to be a dentist are rich. And why I want to be a police is police are cool and good. But I have to be smart But actually I am not smart so I have to study hard and be more smarter. I am sad that I am not smart and when I'm smart I will be very happy and cry.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday baby!

Thank you so much for sending in your composition.

I really appreciate your time making this.

And don\'t say you\'re not smart because you are. Believe in yourself like I always believe in you.

I will call you then again my dear.

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher.

>>CORRECT
 Today I will tell you about my dream.

>>CORRECT
 My dream Is being a dentist or police.

>>CORRECT

 Why I want to be a dentist are rich.

>>The reason why I want to be a dentist is because of the salary I can earn.
 And why I want to be a police is police are cool and good.

>>I want to be a police because it\'s cool.

 But I have to be smart But actually I am not smart so I have to study hard and be more smarter.

>>I have to be smart to achieve my goal.
 I am sad that I am not smart and when I\'m smart I will be very happy and cry.

>>CORRECT


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