hello teacher~

2017-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~!! Today I will tell you about today science festival. Today we have a science festival. It was very fun. We make many science stuff. It was very interesting and marvelous. And we experience a many science thing. Today morning our class went to school early and we prepare a science stuff for science festival. Today was very fun and I want to try it again.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby! Happy Friday!

Thank you so much for doing a very good job.

Keep up the good work.

Talk to you again and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher~!!

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about today science festival.

>>Today I will tell you about today\'s Science festival.
 Today we have a science festival.

>>We had our Science festival today.
 It was very fun.

>>correct
 We make many science stuff.

>>We made many Science stuff.
 It was very interesting and marvelous.

>>correct
 And we experience a many science thing.

>>We experienced many Science things.
 Today morning our class went to school early and we prepare a science stuff for science festival.

>>In the morning, our class went to school early and we prepared so many things for the Science festival.
 Today was very fun and I want to try it again.

>>correct

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