hello teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby! Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing a very good job.
Keep up the good work.
Talk to you again and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!!
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Today I will tell you about today science festival.
>>Today I will tell you about today\'s Science festival.
Today we have a science festival.
>>We had our Science festival today.
It was very fun.
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We make many science stuff.
>>We made many Science stuff.
It was very interesting and marvelous.
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And we experience a many science thing.
>>We experienced many Science things.
Today morning our class went to school early and we prepare a science stuff for science festival.
>>In the morning, our class went to school early and we prepared so many things for the Science festival.
Today was very fun and I want to try it again.
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