Hello teacher!!

2017-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend. At saturday I went to play soccer. It was very fun,hard and hot. And I studyed at home and I played game It was very fun. At sunday I went to my grand parent house. And I watched tv It was just fun and we ate a delicious food. It was delicious but I ate a little bit of it. Because I was full. When I ate a delicious food I will eat all of it. I play soccer at my grand parent house too. It was very fun too. And at home I help my parent cleaning the house. It was very hard and tired. And I read a book It was not fun. But I ate dinner and I play a game. It was very fun because I like playing game.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!
Wow you did a lot last weekend!

I am glad you had a quality time with your family thank you so much for sharing.

Cant wait to hear your voice again!
Take care and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend.

>>correct
 At saturday I went to play soccer.

>>correct
 It was very fun,hard and hot.

>>correct
 And I studyed at home and I played game It was very fun.

>>And I studied home and played a game that was fun.
 At sunday I went to my grand parent house.

>>Last Sunday I went to my grandparents\' house.
 And I watched tv It was just fun and we ate a delicious food.

>>correct
 It was delicious but I ate a little bit of it.

>>correct
 Because I was full.

>>correct
 When I ate a delicious food I will eat all of it.

>>correct
 I play soccer at my grand parent house too.

>>I also played soccer at my grandparents\' house.
 It was very fun too.

>>correct
 And at home I help my parent cleaning the house.

>>And at home I helped my parents in cleaning the house.
 It was very hard and tired.

>>It was very tiresome and hard.
 And I read a book It was not fun.

>>I also read a book but it was not fun.
 But I ate dinner and I play a game.

>>I ate dinner and played a game.
 It was very fun because I like playing game.

>>correct

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