Hello teacher!!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there baby!
Wow you did a lot last weekend!
I am glad you had a quality time with your family thank you so much for sharing.
Cant wait to hear your voice again!
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher.
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Today I will tell you about what I did at weekend.
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At saturday I went to play soccer.
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It was very fun,hard and hot.
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And I studyed at home and I played game It was very fun.
>>And I studied home and played a game that was fun.
At sunday I went to my grand parent house.
>>Last Sunday I went to my grandparents\' house.
And I watched tv It was just fun and we ate a delicious food.
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It was delicious but I ate a little bit of it.
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Because I was full.
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When I ate a delicious food I will eat all of it.
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I play soccer at my grand parent house too.
>>I also played soccer at my grandparents\' house.
It was very fun too.
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And at home I help my parent cleaning the house.
>>And at home I helped my parents in cleaning the house.
It was very hard and tired.
>>It was very tiresome and hard.
And I read a book It was not fun.
>>I also read a book but it was not fun.
But I ate dinner and I play a game.
>>I ate dinner and played a game.
It was very fun because I like playing game.
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