hello teacher

2017-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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hello teacher. I am very sorry about today. Today I had board meeting at school. And I was so busy. I want to take a lesson today but I have no time. Teacher in charge told me that it will over quick. But it was a lie and it take long~~ time to do it. I had to lead a board meeting so I had no time to do a lesson. I'm really sorry about today and It will never happen again.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] my dear! I missed you!

You don\'t have to say sorry baby because I totally understand it.

I was once a student so I know it is not easy to manage time.

And it\'s so sweet of you to say that though thank you so much baby!
I cant wait to see you again...

Take care always! I love you! Have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

hello teacher.

>>correct
 I am very sorry about today.

>>correct
 Today I had board meeting at school.

>>correct

OR: I conducted a meeting today at school.
 And I was so busy.

>>correct
 I want to take a lesson today but I have no time.

>>I wanted to take the lesson but I had no time.
 Teacher in charge told me that it will over quick.

>>The teacher in charge told me that it will be finished soon.
 But it was a lie and it take long~~ time to do it.

>>But it was the opposite.
 I had to lead a board meeting so I had no time to do a lesson.

>>I had to conduct the meeting so I had no time for the lesson.
 I\'m really sorry about today and It will never happen again.

>>correct

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