hello teacher.

2017-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~!!!. Today I will tell you about my day at school. Today I went to school and I read a book. And our 1 and 2 class I had a korean class It was very fun. And at the break time I play baseball with my friends and my school principal gave me a citation and I was very very happy. At our 3 class I studyed english It was very fun and exciting. And at our 4,5,6 class I studyed math. Today was very fun day.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby!

Happy Monday!

Thank you for sharing about your day.

I had fun talking today! Take care always and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher~!!!.

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Today I will tell you about my day at school.

>>correct

Today I went to school and I read a book.

>>correct

And our 1 and 2 class I had a korean class It was very fun.

>Our first and second classes we had our Korean class and it was very fun.

And at the break time I play baseball with my friends and my school principal gave me a citation and I was very very happy.

>>In my break time I played baseball with my friends and my school principal gave me a citation and I was very happy.

At our 3 class I studyed english It was very fun and exciting.

>>We studied English in our third class and it was very fun and exciting.

And at our 4,5,6 class I studyed math.

>>I studied Math in all fourth, fifth and sixth classes.

Today was very fun day.

>>correct

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