hello teacher.
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby!
Happy Monday!
Thank you for sharing about your day.
I had fun talking today! Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!!!.
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Today I will tell you about my day at school.
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Today I went to school and I read a book.
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And our 1 and 2 class I had a korean class It was very fun.
>Our first and second classes we had our Korean class and it was very fun.
And at the break time I play baseball with my friends and my school principal gave me a citation and I was very very happy.
>>In my break time I played baseball with my friends and my school principal gave me a citation and I was very happy.
At our 3 class I studyed english It was very fun and exciting.
>>We studied English in our third class and it was very fun and exciting.
And at our 4,5,6 class I studyed math.
>>I studied Math in all fourth, fifth and sixth classes.
Today was very fun day.
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