hello teacher:)

2017-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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hello, teacher:) Long time no see~! I really missed you so much. teacher can you see the picture we already talked about him He is 17years old (korean age), lee dae whi and he is a great dancer, singer I hope he can be a idol someday Anyway about my friend We fought last thursday. It was really hot on that day We went to volunteer together almost every month we go to volunteer work in school on that day i fought with my friend We were having great time But we fought a little about the water Then we get angry So, i just hang out with other friend But now we made up so i feel great~! Now i have to go!!!! see you tomorrow! love you

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! I have missed you soooooo much! I am so so so happy that you are back!
I have waited so much for this day to come.

Thank you so much for sharing about that very handsome idol...I am sure he will become famous...

And about your friend, I am glad that you have tried patching things up...

You are indeed a very good friend.

Take care always baby and love you! Good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

hello, teacher:)

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 Long time no see~!

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 I really missed you so much.

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 teacher can you see the picture

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 we already talked about him

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 He is 17years old (korean age), lee dae whi

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 and he is a great dancer, singer 

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 I hope he can be a idol someday

>>I hope he can become an idol someday.
 Anyway about my friend

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 We fought last thursday.

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 It was really hot on that day

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 We went to volunteer together

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OR: We went to a volunteer work together.
 almost every month we go to volunteer work in school

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on that day i fought with my friend

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 We were having great time

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 But we fought a little about the water

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 Then we get angry

>>Then we got mad at each other.
 So, i just hang out with other friend

>>So I just hung out with the other friends.
 But now we made up

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 so i feel great~!

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 Now i have to go!!!! see you tomorrow! love you

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