hello teacher:)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby! I have missed you soooooo much! I am so so so happy that you are back!
I have waited so much for this day to come.
Thank you so much for sharing about that very handsome idol...I am sure he will become famous...
And about your friend, I am glad that you have tried patching things up...
You are indeed a very good friend.
Take care always baby and love you! Good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
hello, teacher:)
>>correct
Long time no see~!
>>correct
I really missed you so much.
>>correct
teacher can you see the picture
>>correct
we already talked about him
>>correct
He is 17years old (korean age), lee dae whi
>>correct
and he is a great dancer, singer
>>correct
I hope he can be a idol someday
>>I hope he can become an idol someday.
Anyway about my friend
>>correct
We fought last thursday.
>>correct
It was really hot on that day
>>correct
We went to volunteer together
>>correct
OR: We went to a volunteer work together.
almost every month we go to volunteer work in school
>>correct
on that day i fought with my friend
>>correct
We were having great time
>>correct
But we fought a little about the water
>>correct
Then we get angry
>>Then we got mad at each other.
So, i just hang out with other friend
>>So I just hung out with the other friends.
But now we made up
>>correct
so i feel great~!
>>correct
Now i have to go!!!! see you tomorrow! love you
>>correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.