Hello teacher~
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby!
Thank you so much for doing a great job!
I think you are strong ;) You love sports and you\'re good at them!
Cant wait to hear your voice again!
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!!!.
>>correct
Today I will tell you about my hobby.
>>correct
My hobby Is sport I like playing sport and I am good at it.
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OR: My hobby is playing sports.
Why I get my hobby is when I was 7years old I feel something.
>>I started with my hobby when I was 7 years old.
And when I was 8years old I was so good at sports.
>>When I turned 8 years old I became really good at sports.
So I got this hobby.
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My hobby Is make me healthy and more stronger.
>>My hobby makes me healthier and stronger.
But my hobby make me sunburn and sometime It make me hurt.
>>But my hobby makes me have sunburn and it\'s very painful.
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