Hello teacher~!

2017-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! Did you had a good day? Today i didn't have any special things:( Any way i was checking my feedback I found the homework I didn't know that i have some homework HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task! "Time is money." Do you agree or disagree? Why? My answere is agree Time is very important and time never come back So, i think it is more priceless than the money We can earn moeny by working But we can't earn time by working or anything~!! So i think it is very important This is my answere now i have to go see you on the class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!

Thank you for doing your composition...

Great job! I hope you will keep up the good work...

Take care and have a good night baby!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!

>>correct
 Did you had a good day?

>>Did you have a good day?
 Today i didn\'t have any special things:(

>>correct
 Any way i was checking my feedback 

>>correct
 I found the homework

>>correct
 I didn\'t know that i have some homework
>>correct
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task!
\"Time is money.\"
Do you agree or disagree? Why?

My answere is agree

>>correct

OR: I agree to this statement.
 Time is very important and time never come back

>>Time is very important and we can\'t go back in time.
 So, i think it is more priceless than the money

>>correct
 We can earn moeny by working

>>correct

OR: We can earn money when we work.
 But we can\'t earn time by working or anything~!!

>>correct
 So i think it is very important

>>correct
 This is my answere

>>correct
 now i have to go 

>>correct
 see you on the class~!

>>See you  in class!

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