Hello teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there baby!
Thank you for doing your composition...
Great job! I hope you will keep up the good work...
Take care and have a good night baby!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher~!
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Did you had a good day?
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Today i didn\'t have any special things:(
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Any way i was checking my feedback
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I found the homework
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I didn\'t know that i have some homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task!
\"Time is money.\"
Do you agree or disagree? Why?
My answere is agree
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OR: I agree to this statement.
Time is very important and time never come back
>>Time is very important and we can\'t go back in time.
So, i think it is more priceless than the money
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We can earn moeny by working
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OR: We can earn money when we work.
But we can\'t earn time by working or anything~!!
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So i think it is very important
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This is my answere
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now i have to go
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see you on the class~!
>>See you in class!
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