Hello teacher~!!!!!!!~~~~!~!~!~!~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby good evening!
Thank you so much for sharing about your plans.
I hope I could also do the same...waaah!
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~.
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Today i will tell you about what i will do on weekend.
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At saturday I will go play soccer.
>>On Saturday I will go play soccer.
And when I come back to my home i will study math and science.
>>And when I get back home I will study Math and Science.
And I will go to my grand parents house and I will watch a tv,and
>>I will also go to my grandparents\' house and will watch TV
I will play smartphone game. and i will play soccer and baseball with my 2 cousin.
>>I will also play some mobile games and play soccer and baseball with my 2 cousins.
At saturday i will play baseball with my cousin.
>>On Saturday I will play baseball with my cousin.
And at night i will come back to home and I will do my homework.
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And i will watch gagconcert.
>>I am also going to watch Gag concert.
I think it will be so fun.
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OR: I think it will be very fun.
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