Hello teacher~!!!!!!!~~~~!~!~!~!~!

2017-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~. Today i will tell you about what i will do on weekend. At saturday I will go play soccer. And when I come back to my home i will study math and science. And I will go to my grand parents house and I will watch a tv,and I will play smartphone game. and i will play soccer and baseball with my 2 cousin. At saturday i will play baseball with my cousin. And at night i will come back to home and I will do my homework. And i will watch gagconcert. I think it will be so fun.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening!
Thank you so much for sharing about your plans.

I hope I could also do the same...waaah!

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

 

Hello teacher~.

>>correct
Today i will tell you about what i will do on weekend.

>>correct
At saturday I will go play soccer.

>>On Saturday I will go play soccer.

And when I come back to my home i will study math and science.

>>And when I get back home I will study Math and Science.
And I will go to my grand parents house and I will watch a tv,and

>>I will also go to my grandparents\' house and will watch TV

I will play smartphone game. and i will play soccer and baseball with my 2 cousin.

>>I will also play some mobile games and play soccer and baseball with my 2 cousins.

At saturday i will play baseball with my cousin.

>>On Saturday I will play baseball with my cousin.
And at night i will come back to home and I will do my homework.

>>correct
And i will watch gagconcert. 

>>I am also going to watch Gag concert.
I think it will be so fun.

>>correct

OR: I think it will be very fun.

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