hello teacher~!!!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for sharing about this.
Great job!
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.
Take care and have a good night.
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!!!.
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Today I will tell you about my day.
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Today I went to school and I read a book.
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It was not fun.
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And I studyed korean at 1 and 2class.
>>I also studied Korean during my first and second classes.
It was very fun.
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And at break time I played soccer with my friends It was very fun.
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I want to play soccer again.
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And at 3 and 4class I had a english class It was very very fun.
>>During my 3rd and 4th classes I en[이름]ed my English class.
Because my favorite class is english.
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And I ate lunch and I brush my teeth.
>>I ate lunch and brushed my teeth.
And 5class I had a math and at 6class I had a science class.
>>During the fifth class I had math and Science during my 6th class.
It was both fun.
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