hello teacher~!!!

2017-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~!!!. Today I will tell you about my day. Today I went to school and I read a book. It was not fun. And I studyed korean at 1 and 2class. It was very fun. And at break time I played soccer with my friends It was very fun. I want to play soccer again. And at 3 and 4class I had a english class It was very very fun. Because my favorite class is english. And I ate lunch and I brush my teeth. And 5class I had a math and at 6class I had a science class. It was both fun.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for sharing about this.

Great job!

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.

Take care and have a good night.

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher~!!!.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about my day.

>>correct
 Today I went to school and I read a book.

>>correct
 It was not fun.

>>correct
 And I studyed korean at 1 and 2class.

>>I also studied Korean during my first and second classes.
 It was very fun.

>>correct
 And at break time I played soccer with my friends It was very fun.

>>correct
 I want to play soccer again.

>>correct
 And at 3 and 4class I had a english class It was very very fun.

>>During my 3rd and 4th classes I en[이름]ed my English class.
 Because my favorite class is english.

>>correct
 And I ate lunch and I brush my teeth.

>>I ate lunch and brushed my teeth.
 And 5class I had a math and at 6class I had a science class.

>>During the fifth class I had math and Science during my 6th class.
 It was both fun.

>>correct

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