Hello teacher

2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~! I missed you so much:0 are you okay? Actully you looked really bad today I hope you feel better soon When i was young my grandparents took care of me My parents was busy because of work So, i understand you I think your grand mother will be always be next with you She will help you so, don't cry From now on don't cry okay? I hope you feel better I want to see your smile face by the way you look really beautiful wheter you wear glasses or not I love you teacher bye~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening!

Thank you so much for always cheering me up...

I missed you a lot but I had to attend a very important matter and you know that T.T

I am sure everything has a reason. So you too baby, don\'t feel bad okay? I am sure dad and mom will soon give you a better phone, iphone!

I will be showing you a better me next time baby I love you so much.

Thank you so much.

Take care and good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher~!

>>correct
 I missed you so much:0 are you okay?

>>correct
 Actully you looked really bad today

>>correct
 I hope you feel better soon

>>correct
 When i was young my grandparents took care of me

>>correct
 My parents was busy because of work

>>correct
 So, i understand you

>>correct
 I think your grand mother will be always be next with you

>>correct
 She will help you so, don\'t cry

>>correct
 From now on don\'t cry okay?

>>correct
 I hope you feel better

>>correct
 I want to see your smile face

>>I want to see you smile

OR: I want to see your smiling face.
 by the way you look really beautiful wheter you wear glasses or not

>>By the way you still look beautiful whether you wear glasses or not
 I love you teacher bye~!

>>correct

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