hello teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby good evening! How are you?
I am so sorry. I was absent because I had to attend a very important matter.
That was a very scary dream. I can\'t wait to hear more from you baby.
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Today I will tell you about my dream.
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Yesterday I had a nightmare.
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My dream has a ghost and a zombie.
>>There were some ghosts and zombies in my dream.
It was very scary.
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It was about i went to the haunted house with my friends.
>>My dream was about going to the haunted
And I lost all of my friends.
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And I was so scary and I crash the door but the door was too many to crash, and I do my best to get out but it was hopeless.
>>And I was so scared that crashed the door but there were too many doors too crash.
So I just walk around the haunted house and I met a ghost and a zombie.
>>So I just walked around the haunted house and met the ghost and the zombie.
And I wake up it was too scary.
>>And I woke up it was too scary.
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