hello teacher

2017-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Today I will tell you about my dream. Yesterday I had a nightmare. My dream has a ghost and a zombie. It was very scary. It was about i went to the haunted house with my friends. And I lost all of my friends. And I was so scary and I crash the door but the door was too many to crash, and I do my best to get out but it was hopeless. So I just walk around the haunted house and I met a ghost and a zombie. And I wake up it was too scary.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good evening! How are you?
I am so sorry. I was absent because I had to attend a very important matter.

That was a very scary dream. I can\'t wait to hear more from you baby.

Take care and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Today I will tell you about my dream. 

 >>correct                               
Yesterday I had a nightmare.

>>correct
 My dream has a ghost and a zombie.

>>There were some ghosts and zombies in my dream.
 It was very scary.

>>correct
 It was about i went to the haunted house with my friends.

>>My dream was about going to the haunted
 And I lost all of my friends.

>>correct
 And I was so scary and I crash the door but the door was too many to crash, and I do my best to get out but it was hopeless.

>>And I was so scared that  crashed the door but there were too many doors too crash.
 So I just walk around the haunted house and I met a ghost and a zombie.

>>So I just walked around the haunted house and met the ghost and the zombie.
 And I wake up it was too scary.

>>And I woke up it was too scary.

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