Hello teacher~!

2017-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~! Are you feeling better? Yesterday you look really not good Today i will just answer your question Our homework was "If you could invent a video game what kind of game would you create and why?" I want to invent video game named gunfight In this game they can fight with gun if they have a better gun than other one they win Very simple game.. Actully i am not that good at making game, or invetion something This day i feel really tired teacher :( I think my head is empty There is nothing in my head:( what should i do? When you feel better, please answer this question!!! I think i have to go now.. see you on the class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for always cheering me up...

To be honest with you. I don\'t know how I would wake up everyday and feel good. I have been facing so many problems nowadays and sometimes I cant do anything but to pretend everything is okay even if it\'s not. You know what baby, you have to be strong. We have to be strong. I am always here for you like you always do to me and I thank you always for that.

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Hello teacher~!

>>correct
 Are you feeling better?

>>correct
 Yesterday you look really not good

>>You looked really bad yesterday.
 Today i will just answer your question 

>>correct  
Our homework was

>>correct

 \"If you could invent a video game what kind of game would you create and why?\"

>>correct
 I want to invent video game named gunfight

>>I want to invent a video game named GunFight.

 In this game they can fight with gun if they have a better gun than other one they win

>>correct
 Very simple game..

>>correct

 Actully i am not that good at making game, or invetion something

>>Actually I am not good at making some games in inventing something.
 This day i feel really tired teacher :(

>>correct

 I think my head is empty

>>correct
 There is nothing in my head:( what should i do?

>>correct

 When you feel better, please answer this question!!!

>>correct
 I think i have to go now.. see you on the class~!

>>correct


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