Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi baby! Good evening!
Thank you so much for always cheering me up...
To be honest with you. I don\'t know how I would wake up everyday and feel good. I have been facing so many problems nowadays and sometimes I cant do anything but to pretend everything is okay even if it\'s not. You know what baby, you have to be strong. We have to be strong. I am always here for you like you always do to me and I thank you always for that.
Take care always and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!
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Are you feeling better?
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Yesterday you look really not good
>>You looked really bad yesterday.
Today i will just answer your question
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Our homework was
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\"If you could invent a video game what kind of game would you create and why?\"
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I want to invent video game named gunfight
>>I want to invent a video game named GunFight.
In this game they can fight with gun if they have a better gun than other one they win
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Very simple game..
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Actully i am not that good at making game, or invetion something
>>Actually I am not good at making some games in inventing something.
This day i feel really tired teacher :(
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I think my head is empty
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There is nothing in my head:( what should i do?
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When you feel better, please answer this question!!!
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I think i have to go now.. see you on the class~!
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